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Nov 1, 2011 | 8:55 AM EDT

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Don't worry there will be more. This is just a preview of one days work (well about 1h work actually..)
i didn't have much time to sit around and draw but now i have and finally i can do my whole episode!!!
I submitted this cuz i was a little exited to see what you think. DO you like it? or do you hate it?! i know i know theres not much to see here... but its not the worst drawing here in ng ;D i mean come on i saw way.. WAY lamer drawings then mine. Umm the first episode may be hold down until i find voice actors... ugh hard to find them... :( episode will be about 7-10 mins long :))) i hope you like visuals. Not the best but not the worst huh? ;D

p.s love you guys :)

p.p.s bye! xD

Reviews


AmazukeAmazuke

Rated 3 / 5 stars

There's potential...

I did like the feel of a barren forest in the middle of winter. I also enjoyed the detail you put into having the cool winter breeze around the character ruffle his hair. I felt that truly paid a bit of homage to the character's surroundings. I feel, however, you rushed the zombie animation a bit. I found it to be a bit disproportional. The pose involving the protagonist shooting the zombie in the head was a bit awkward, I would work on angles like that...or use a different one entirely if you don't feel confident. The spelling in your story is a bit distracting, there is also grammatical errors. If you don't feel confident in your writing abilities, I am sure there is are individuals willing to help you. The story could also use a bit more development. The single paragraph without building up the mood, on top of the spelling and grammatical errors, causes the reader to be a bit biased before the movie even starts. I won't criticize the length of the film, due to the fact it was a preview. I, however, believe there is much room for improvement.



sharkman9ksharkman9k

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

STAY IN SCHOOL KIDS!!!

I'll give you a 3 for effort. Now here's me ripping you a new one.
1. LEARN THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE!!!
2. Learn how to tell a story. What you have done here is shoddily set up a lame action sequence.
3. Get some other people to help you with animation and music/voice. Don't just get your middle school buddies to provide grainy voice work to add to this hodgepodge of mismatched themes
4. ????
5. PROFIT!!!



link2000link2000

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

wth?

dude it sucks and all, but I dont think its hateful or malicious maybe stolen but not worth tossing



BandSreviewsBandSreviews

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Submit your final work plz

As it this flash is there isn't much to say about this flash video. I am looking forward to the actually Demon Tales series and can't wait until you finish it. I am not going to give any stars to this because it's not your finished work. There is nothing to rate here.



RathitxRathitx

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Reasonable

Look, its good, a little choppy, but the portal is no place for previews that are only 2 minutes.