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So this is my first full fledged film and it's not very flashy. Hopefully my dry wit will outweigh the suck, if not, let me know.
For making me laugh
I always enjoy a little dry humor. But this was easily one of the funniest videos I've watched. For your first time you've earned a solid 7/5. It would have been a 10, but you need to work on your audio a bit and your animation skills. The audio was nice, but it felt grainy. And the animation was nice for the video, but you can do better than that. Good luck in the future.
Not bad for the first time out
Your technique is primitive, but you have a good message and decent ideas.
May I introduce myself? is pretty good. 7 out of 10.
To the author:
This flash didn't have to be looped. The audio record level was too high. Look out for that the next time.
Needs a little more work
I find the quality throughout the movie inconsistent.
The concept was pretty good, some parts were funny and art is good in some scenes. Layout in scenes with words need polishing.
But anyway this is just my opinion.
I definitely enjoyed some parts (add faces to everything). / lol
I can enjoy your sense of humor, but does it have to loop? Also, I'm not sure if I understand the point or why it's called "May I introduce myself" when this is sort of about...getting into making games? I dunno, I'm not one to criticize since I don't know how to make games, but I feel like this needs more of a point. Or something.
A short film about a park bench
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