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I'm a first year multimedia student, this is my first flash big flash project.
I found mosquito really annoying, which inspires me in this flash.
Any feedback would be great as I'm enjoying Flash and wish to make some more movies.
I see a really great future for u;
it was okay
I believe you have a good start because the art was pretty good and that is a plus. I did not like the part with the circles. you should add voices to your next flash submission because the fly sound hurt my eyes.
Not bad for your first flash.
Although the animation was quite crude and the sound quality was quite annoying at times, there were moments where your animaton did shine. Particularly when all the mosquitoes came at once. I get the basic drift of the cartoon, describing how annoying they can be. Overall its not brilliant but its not crap either, good work and keep practicing!
A short film about a park bench
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