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your work reminds me of noogai's animator vs. animation series. perhaps you had been inspired by the series? i recommend you check out his Flashes, if you have not already. it is only a recommendation, so do so if you wish.
overall, i enjoyed your animation. i felt it was too slow-paced. action should be fast, it should be quick, it should hit you like a train. the sound effects were enjoyable. your own sound effects? i like that.
for your first Flash, this is pretty good. i wish you luck in your future endeavors. cheers!
Yes, I was inspired by his work, but I didn't want to copy him, so I tried my own thing.
I created all the sound effects myself, except for the music tracks. I'm glad you liked it!
Thanks, I appreciate your input!
I'm guessing that there's a bunch of you uni students submitting work together? If not then I apologise, but if so I think you've made the best one so far out of all the ones I've seen. It reminded me of Animator vs Animation. Great job for a nooby :) Keep up the good work, this was quality.
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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 28, 2011
animator vs. animation
your work reminds me of noogai's animator vs. animation series. perhaps you had been inspired by the series? i recommend you check out his Flashes, if you have not already. it is only a recommendation, so do so if you wish.
overall, i enjoyed your animation. i felt it was too slow-paced. action should be fast, it should be quick, it should hit you like a train. the sound effects were enjoyable. your own sound effects? i like that.
for your first Flash, this is pretty good. i wish you luck in your future endeavors. cheers!
Yes, I was inspired by his work, but I didn't want to copy him, so I tried my own thing.
I created all the sound effects myself, except for the music tracks. I'm glad you liked it!
Thanks, I appreciate your input!
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 28, 2011
Awesome
I'm guessing that there's a bunch of you uni students submitting work together? If not then I apologise, but if so I think you've made the best one so far out of all the ones I've seen. It reminded me of Animator vs Animation. Great job for a nooby :) Keep up the good work, this was quality.
Yes, we were indeed a whole bunch of students!
Thank you for the positive review!