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Oct 28, 2011 | 6:07 AM EDT

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This is my first attempt at a flash animation, inspired by my love for programming. I hope you enjoy it. Any criticism is welcome.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

It was good!

Not to take a anything away from what you've made, but this could be improved. Although it looks well storyboarded and you clearly spent a lot of time on it so I won't be too harsh, my first flash wasn't anywhere near as good as this. However, I think the sound quality needs to be improved, plus early on in the flash I think there's a little problem with the shape tween you've done with the lightbulb over the characters head? Maybe just use the graphic of the lightbulb, convert it to a movie clip, then motion tween the alpha from 0% to 100% so it 'appears' above his head? Just a thought. Annnd also don't use the line tool! :P Everyone hates the line tool.. but keep at this! You've clearly got some talent.

PainHex responds:

Thank you for the positive response. I will continue to work on my animating. And about the lightbulb, thanks for the advice, I was wondering of better ways to do it. Thanks again! I value your criticism.