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Happy Autumn, from me! This is just a simple (first!!) flash project done by me for school.
Cute, could use work
For your very first flash project, it was nice. Cute, simple concept and nice music. It definitely need some work, though. Have a couple more options, figure out how to make the music loop... Things like that. As of right now it feels like an online greeting card - which isn't necessarily a bad thing, just not exactly what Newgrounds is for.
Keep working at it. Like I said, if this really is your first flash, it's pretty good. You could have some potential.
Thank you for your critic. The assignment was actually an e-card. Our professor also told us it's good to put some of our work on newgrounds to get recognized. I guess an e-card isn't standard here, huh.
I appreciate it.
it has nice graphics
but i don't quite undterstand what to do. o.O
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
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