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Oct 22, 2011 | 7:12 PM EDT

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Hey, hope you like it! It's been on my site for a while and I thought I would put it up here. I'm finishing up the sequel (still) and I'll put that up here too when I'm done. Thanks for voting!

Reviews


DarkMatterDarkMatter

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

This is actually really good

I really loved the way you layed the scenes out economically and tried not to waste any work. I love how you used real hallways and had the character walk in and out of the shot, then continue through a cut to the next hall. It was like the viewer could actually map out the house they were in, giving it a touch of reality.

I also enjoyed the style of the characters limbs and in the film in general, the proportions were realistic yet their forelimbs were shrunk which to me kind of emphasized there limbs movement which was well animated, looked like it was done over a real person running as a template. Kind of like a stylized realism, really cool to see people doing that more.



ErichoEricho

Rated 4 / 5 stars

How odd

Wow, this is just too surreal to understand. Of course, I still have to recommend it because the artwork is wonderfully done. I am normally not a fan of dark outlines, but this cartoon actually made it work. To think we would get something so ridiculous from a bunch of guys talking at their table. I have no idea at all what is going on and I don't think it matters. It sounds like the Grim Reaper is trying to saw that something is crispy or something.

This could have been quicker paced, but I'm not sure. It might not have been as effective in its absurdity if it had been. This is interesting because you have no idea what's going to happen next. This is mostly because you have no idea what's even going on right now. I would never trust the Grim Reaper who randomly spok about crispy stuff.


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ptomaineArtptomaineArt

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Stunned!

See above...



MordozMordoz

Rated 4 / 5 stars

confusing but interesting

awesome so far
But I would suggest making their arms more, lets say proportional like the rest of their bodies. As their arms are now, they look like sticks.

oh and baldy there really wasn't smart spilling a hole right in front of their front door lol. a closest floor would have been better. That's not really a complaint, I'm just seeing that character isn't all that bright in the way of thinking before acting.

good work so far. I hope you reveal some story plot and go more in depth on character development. It really needs it. You kinda started this abruptly without any explanation.

Looking forward to more!



LordODLordOD

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Disturbing to say the least.

I dont know what you were trying to achieve or message to give, however it wasnt bad, I have to say that the reaction of the guy that sees death is very natural, not expecting what he was looking at or the situation around him and that death was a big jerk, I hate the guy and only shows up for half a minute. I dont know why I liked it, but I have to say I liked the style of animation, reminds me of some serious low budget projects I went in college, the story ... well it was too short for a story but it felt like the begining of something or a sudden ending. The rain in the background made it even more scary, chilling.

Am giving a 10 of 10 cause for some reason I think it was brilliant.