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Oct 21, 2011 | 10:06 PM EDT
  • Underdog of the Week October 26, 2011

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This was at first a chore, but the more I made, the more I liked it. It's an odd trend that my toons tend to start weak and end strong. There a few bugs and hiccups here and there. I couldn't be arsed to fix them. I just fixed the major problems I saw.

If anyone knows how I can export a more higher quality video for youtube, I'd love to hear it, PM me please.

Feel free to recommend this for the 2011 Halloween collection.

My little pony is copyright to Hasbro and this video is intended to be a non-profit fan based parody.

UPDATE: To those of you voting this submission low simply because it kills off Rainbow Dash: Grow the fuck up. It's a non-canon parody of a fan fiction about fictional characters that don't exist (redundancy much?). You were warned twice! Verbally and in writing. Focus on the work and how well it portrays the fan fiction and NOT on how I killed off Rainbow Dash. For fucks sake, kids...

Update2: I haven't a clue as to why there's a "2011 Movie of the Year Award" underneath the underdog of the week. Any explainations?



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

It was ok

But it would be better if you could hear them talk


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


I liked it although I wish you had animated Pinkie's dress.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

My dreams and hopes were destroyed...

Hahaha, dude youre crazy, i mean...they are so cuuuuuute, never imagined this :(

but still, is your idea, style, whatever, it was good XD


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

My Honest Opinion

Personally, I felt that this flash deserved a decently honest review. So. I will tell what i thought of it.

First of all, let me just start off by saying, that you did a wonderful job with appearance. And the animation was not perfect, but it still gave a very nice feel to everything. I've searched around, and i have not found many other people who have recreated this story into a full animation. So for doing this, you have my respect!

Now. As for the story, it felt as if it were rushed. Very rushed. I enjoyed the passage so much because it slowly built into a climactic scene of horror that you couldn't stray away from once you entered. One minute you read about someone eating a cupcake, and the next minute your heart is pounding with anticipation, wondering what could possibly happen next as all the emotions in your body spark all at once.

Voice is not an issue. An entire story can be told through a single piece of music. In fact, speech bubbles may have just ruined the whole thing. But I thought this flash needed more of a classic cartoon feel (such as Tom and Jerry) where the entire story is told with nothing but actions and music. You did a wonderful job highlighting the main points of the story, but everything flew by so fast that it never had a chance to register in peoples minds.

Overall, i think you're a wonderful flash animator, with fantastic potential. I just feel that more effort could have been put into this, to make it the best Cupcakes movie out there (if not the only one out there). I would very, very highly recommend practicing with flash even more to become even better! I would also very much recommend perhaps, sometime in the future, coming back to this project that has an unbelievable amount of potential, and working on it even more. Add all the scenes from the story. Take things slower and at a less rapid pace. Adding more suspense, and detail. And creating one of the most breath taking flash animations out there!

All in all, it was a very amazing flash! In no way was i judging your animation or your artistic skills! I just can't help but get the feeling that you rushed yourself too much. As i always say, the animation should be as much fun for the animator to make, as it is for the audience to watch!

You have an amazing amount of potential, regardless of what anyone else says. I hope you will consider taking my advice; and I wish you the best of luck in the future!

-Anal P.

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MikeandTreyVideo responds:

Thank you for giving one of the few constructive criticisms that newgrounds can give. I really am hoping to do this again next year, give myself more time so I can finish on time with a much longer (and scarier) version, and possibly add voices. Basically improve on the problems that are pointed out most (no voices, rushed, etc).