A Boy and his Box
Credits & Info
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Author Xcyper33
- Uploaded
- Oct 20, 2011 | 2:32 AM EDT
- File Info
- Movie
- 11.1 mb
- Daily 3rd Place October 21, 2011
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Author Comments
This is by far the longest animation I've ever done. Its a wopping 17 minutes long, worked on it for 7 weeks straight. Get some snacks and drinks, sit back, and enjoy the tale of a Boy and his Box.
**Update**
Daily 3rd place, thanks newgrounds!
Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 20, 2011
A Boy and his Box
This is quite a interesting story you have made here, my lad. It has a good theme that is medieval. It has a good purpose, a "Legend" that you told. Also a good moral that is usually in this kind of theme. If you succeed to get a couple of views and become popular, you can remake this and make it have good graphics like get a artist to help. Even though the entire thing was narration, it's pretty good. I'm repeating good so much. Sorry for saying so much. Anyways, thanks for the show.
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 20, 2011
Tri-Force what?
What a nice story. I hope to see what happens to the peeps in the next installment.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 20, 2011
uh, long in a bad way.
it's prophesied, not prophesized. The voice acting is really solid, but there's too much narration. Too wordy! it'd be fine if it was an audiobook, but as an animation it's tiresome. Why say "with a great big smile on his face"? It should be visible that he's smiling. If you insist, less adjectives, better words. make it into "with a grin,". The music worked really well, it made it less boring, and improved it by 3X. As for colour, I like how you restricted it a bit, but the gray in the cave wasn't dark enough, and it'd be even better if you gave it slight colouring. I also particularily love how I paused it and it went to the beginning. Not finishing it, sorry.
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 20, 2011
Excellent
The story and voice acting were both very good. You really don't see many allegories or omniscient narration these days. It made for a nice change of pace. Normally, I'm not a huge fan of stick figure animation, but the animation got the job done. I cannot fault it. I wished the story had a pause button, but that's a minor flaw, that is more Newground's problem than yours. Overall, It was quite enjoyable.
Thank you for the review. I chose the artstyle because I was on a timelimit.
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 20, 2011
DAMNIT!! XC
I WANA HEAR HELMETS GROWN UP STORY :c
great vid,art,plott,story :D
not so bad voise acting but youl get 10/10
couse i am in a good mode :3