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Uploaded
Oct 12, 2011 | 4:10 PM EDT

Author Comments

My first cartoon!
Took about 30 hours to make...
music is "carmina burana o fortuna" by composer Carl Orff
...oops...thought it would stop when last frame is reached...repairing...

Reviews


TheDevilMyselfTheDevilMyself

Rated 0 / 5 stars October 12, 2011

Potentially good

Your animation style is great - and i love the attention you paid to the background. These things will win over people....

When you actually try.

Learn a little action script... gotoandstop gotoandplay etc.... it's not hard, and it stops your animation from repeating itself over and over.

Stating the obvious - it's too short.

Also, it does not linger on the shovel long enough.

I could go on forever picking this apart, but it's obvious you just didn't spend any time on it. If it's just a sketch, send it to DA, not NG...

Hope you keep at it, and come up with a bigger better flash. It takes time, but you can do it.



JeffyxJeffyx

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 12, 2011

woah

this is beast. favoreted. check my flashes out to