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finaly part 2 is up!
(I was bored D:)
What the heck???
When you zoomed in it made everything all wavy which was really hurting my eyes and was really annoying, also the story seems really patchy, like how they didn't give any real information who was there when Knuckles is all like"He was there" and then you show like a 3 seconds of whoever that was that was standing there...
Then the sound effects you put for most of the scenes were horrible, does tails really sound like a helicopter when he flys?
and also about the words, it was annoying to see it go up and down, and the text went to fast at most parts, not only that but they pretty much said they same thing over twice which was dumb, The fighting would've been better if they weren't talking, also This series is totally not original, Super Sonic Bros Z????
What the heck?? unless your putting in sonic's brother to help him or something, don't have that title of this video!
Story: nothing new
music: they didn't go that well together but was good
where this story is going to: to oblivion
But i'm giving you this score for this main reason: not original
Try again nexttime
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not so good
well let's begin:
Animation: it was ok i guess but most of the times it was messy and i could see the white BG also i didn't understood why you moved the text all the time it made it even more annoying to read....
about the battle it was too slow paced sonic hit knuckles knuckles talks and hit sonic
just boring and short
Story: just stupid and it had no originality into it 1/10
Music: pretty good and it add to the atmosphere 7/10
directing: well it was boring like the story there wasn't enough use of the v-cam and when there was it wasn't good 2/10
overall i give you: 3.5/10
better luck next time
With a title like Super Sonic Bros. Z, I was ready to blast this for being a SMBZ ripoff, but it turned out okay. Your story is far from original but that doesn't mean it can't get better. Just PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD DO NOT USE MECHA-SONIC AS THE VILLIAN. That would be copying SMBZ too much (not to mention a crap-load of other losers that have used him only because of SMBZ).
As far as the flash, The animation was good. I like the battle between Sonic and Knuckles because it wasn't too painfully DBZ-ish. Some of the character's text was to hard to read. Try adding a drop shadow to the text, that will help a lot.
Needs some major changes and improvement.
As far as animation goes, you're pretty solid at it. However, I believe you should change some of the camera angles and placing of the sprites. At some points, the camera was so "zoomed in" that it was hard to look at the characters they were zoomed in on.
As far as grammar and story quality goes, it needs fixing. I saw plenty of gramatical errors and the story doesn't interest me in the least (perhaps one of the reasons being the wide array of grammar mistakes). I would actually like to help you with this part. Correcting grammar and developing a story.
As far as originality goes, you failed big time. I will even go as far as to say you are plagairizing Alvin-Earthworm. It even screams, "I got most of my ideas from Super Mario Bros. Z" simply by the title (>Super< Sonic >Bros.<? Really?). You better make some BIG changes in this department.
As far as control, sound, and miscellaneous go, they need work as well. I would love to be able to control the speed of the dialogue and read at my own pace. The sound was quite alright, but at some points it simply made me say, "Ouch..." So work on the sound quality and use. Also, you should include a pre-loader and menu (with a scene select?).
All in all, you have potential, but it needs plenty of work and change in presentation. I'll be more than happy to help you in a literary sense, but otherwise I can't support this flash based on the other issues.
You should see to it these issues are fixed and improved upon.
yea im changing the title of it
Could use some work, but it has potential.
That's just the way I feel, I can't exactly give advice since i never made a sprite video before. But grammar wise I've seen plenty of mistakes on that area through-out the video. You should probably use a dictionary next time you write things out :P
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