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Eulogy For 'Hacker Mind - Teaser'

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10-06-11 – 07-11-12

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zelfaldorzelfaldor

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Im sorry, but.....

This is crap. The dialogue is incoherent, does not make even the remotest amount of sense. The animation is deplorable, it is very very choppy and almost non-existent. The animation looks to be as though the animator thought they were using a 3D model even though it is a 2d image. The animator should work much more closely with the artists. The artwork, although done by several different people is very inconsistent, and fairly terrible. I my self cannot do flash. But perhaps you should go online and look at some basic hints and tips for doing animations in flash. I'm sorry if I am sounding like a total asshat. But compared to a lot of other submissions to this site, this unfortunately falls at the lowest end of sub-par. Perhaps if you took some screen play writing and some creative writing courses. You would be able to see some of your larger mistakes.


EMProductionsEMProductions

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Good and bad.

Pros:
Semi-interesting story, if a little trite.
Eye catching cinematic effects.
Good background art.

Cons:
Many of the voice actors ('cept Rina-chan, of course <3) just weren't up to par.
The script needs a bit of work. In the beginning the girl contradicts herself a little and breaks the cinematic feel.
The people were...odd looking to say the least. The robot looks like a badly photoshoped image that was squeezed and skewed to make it look like it was facing left. Not good.
There was barely any animation! 'Cmon, you need animation to make a good animation. All the characters just fade in or out and there's no speaking motion. This is really the biggest thing that ruined it for me.


S-OpsS-Ops

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Shows potential

I hope this thing lifts off as I see it doing very well if it does. The bio domes kinda remind me of big o. If you need help I can do 3d modeling and visual effects so let me know if there's anything I can do.


frozenwavefrozenwave

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Potential

Well, it certainly needs a lot of work, BUT
I really do see potential.
If you keep working, i'm sure you'll make something great.
Ps:
That voice, of the computer or something, sometimes blew into the mic, kind of a turn off.


killerphoenix92killerphoenix92

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Intersting!

Sounds like it has a very good storyline.


InvidiaRedInvidiaRed

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I see great potential in this

so I must say I will watch it when it comes out


GiantDoucheGiantDouche

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Just...Wow...

The writing is bad to the point where it takes away from the other aspects of what's going on. The plot is dull and uninspired (I count at least three popular sci-fi films being blatantly emulated) and the dialogue could not be less grounded in realism.

Also there isn't much actual animation.


TheBodaciousAdmiralTheBodaciousAdmiral

Rated 1 / 5 stars

art was good

drawings themselves were alright. but the voice acting, script and animation were all painfully bad. write a better script and watch some anime to see the style you're trying to replicate

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