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Oct 5, 2011 | 4:49 PM EDT
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Jan - Caxx
Armand - Neo Skywalker
Lhasa - Karen Kahler


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Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow what a jump

From basic slides to a fully animated feature. This was rather well done. and the animation was pretty freaking kewl as well. There's no need for me to comment on the graphics. Keep up the great work looking forward to the next chapter.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Best Yet...However...

I've been following this series since day 1, and I've always been impressed with everything about this series.

The characters are well established in their roles, the scene fits perfectly with the style of music chosen, and the story line is remarkable.

Something I would like to address however...

The voice acting for the female characters was perfect. The dynamics offered a wide range of emotions and the mic quality was equally as impressive.

Joshua Ryan (Armand) however, left much to be desired. His voice seemed very monotonous and dry, as if he was an "amateur". I personally feel (and I bet many others watching this episode feel the same way) that he needs more dynamics in his voice, offering the same type of emotions that the other characters did. On a side note, it was clearly audible that he was speaking into either a lesser quality mic, or something along those lines.

I'm incredibly impressed by the use of animation in this episode, and I cannot wait to see episodes 6, 7 and 8.

Keep up the good work.

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hostility inside and out

Rather than review the movie, I'd rather comment on this episode. What struck me as most interesting here was Jan's interior conversation with her "manifestation". Why would Jan be so antagonistic to somebody who is an aspect of herself? Could it be because the "manifestation" represents an invading presence in Jan's mind? Or does this hostile encounter reveal an antagonistic, self-destructive quality of her personality?


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


This is awesome but if your after funds why dont you put ad's in the preloader?!

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I'm trying to add an advert. Right now it's pending approval.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

loved it

u have improved your animating by a large portion.
and u still kept your own touch to it all.....i applaud u sir 5/5 10/10