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AT LAST!!

you are ANIMATING! YES!!!1 this is fantastic.

I really enjoy your story since chapter 1, I was hoping that you would give it the treatment that your story truly deserves with Proper animation and here you are doing that, now that series will prosper well.

Are you going to do the same for the earlier chapters? or are you going to do that when you'll have more free time? since I'm sure that you are really busy animating the rest of the chapters.

^_^

Congrats on adding voice actors

I was impressed how well animated you got with you character's details, hair moving and eyebrows, which I guess is the basic for good animation. Voices were added seemlessly to the series too, it almost feels like they were always there. The one thing missing here from your episode is the ability to make it stand out from something other than just a transitional flash. Maybe making people have no clue where you are going is something you want, but at the same time, the episodes need their own structure of rising, climax and falling action to be interesting. Right now, its kind of like the matrix broken up in 5 minute segments with a few months between their release. I think this would make a better movie than a straight up flash series. I would recommend that you just ask Tom for the ability to load it all, or atleast in larger parts as rediculous as it sounds. The MB would probably be over 100, but it would keep my attention, more so than right now. This is a great artwork, a tad on the cheesey side, in my opinion, but all great things are. My thesis would be to just add more linear dynamics to an episode, leave us with more questions, while answering some, not the same ones that we've had since the previous episodes. I enjoy your art direction, and am really pleased to see the series got voices.

Great story and animations

Great story, and your animation also looks great. Since the first episode, I couldn't stop watching. And now you have animations and voices, I'm hooked!

I donated, and I hope other people will also to do that. This project is worth every dollar!

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Effing cliffhangers get under my skin, but this has been a great series thus far. Remembered looking at your characters in beginning of series and the female look pretty Ren and Stimpy. This was more fun when I saw the Stimpy on your files. Thanks for the throwback, not a lot of people around me get stuff like that anymore. If I had a credit card and over the table job I'd like to help people out like that. All I got at this point is a thanks, regardless of how this series ends up. Thanks for trying at all.

nice animation

when I saw "END OF CHAPTER FIVE" I was like NOOOO! but I like this episode. everything is soo...awesome. nice work and I hope to see more from you! 5/5 10/10