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Oct 5, 2011 | 4:49 PM EDT
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Rated 5 / 5 stars


Good to see full animation. At first i was ready to say television standards, but there's still a slight 'lag' feeling. Obviously you want to keep the pace slow for tension, but like in previous episodes, i felt it was just a tad exagerated. I really liked the first scene though. And the artwork is excellent as usual :)


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Everything is perfect, might have repeated that before, you are a master at animation and creation of fitting atmospheres.

One thing that keeps it from utmost perfection - watching the flash feels like experiencing something that was stretched beyond its normal speed. a.k.a. some scenes are excessively slow, such as the scenes after the male protagonist exit the bar.

The beginning with the subconscious world is just right, after that, putting things off too long might wear some viewers out.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars


Went from animated comic to full-on professional animation... Well, maybe not to television cartoon standards but for Newgrounds this is gold. Why aren't there more reviews on this?

Watched the whole series from beginning to end when I saw this on the front page. You deserve more positive reviews than this.

Keep up the good work. I expect a good amount of fame to come your way sometime soon.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


you are ANIMATING! YES!!!1 this is fantastic.

I really enjoy your story since chapter 1, I was hoping that you would give it the treatment that your story truly deserves with Proper animation and here you are doing that, now that series will prosper well.

Are you going to do the same for the earlier chapters? or are you going to do that when you'll have more free time? since I'm sure that you are really busy animating the rest of the chapters.


marsoupskin responds:

Thank you. I'm not against the idea perhaps someday in the future. But as you say, I'd rather concentrate on moving forward.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Congrats on adding voice actors

I was impressed how well animated you got with you character's details, hair moving and eyebrows, which I guess is the basic for good animation. Voices were added seemlessly to the series too, it almost feels like they were always there. The one thing missing here from your episode is the ability to make it stand out from something other than just a transitional flash. Maybe making people have no clue where you are going is something you want, but at the same time, the episodes need their own structure of rising, climax and falling action to be interesting. Right now, its kind of like the matrix broken up in 5 minute segments with a few months between their release. I think this would make a better movie than a straight up flash series. I would recommend that you just ask Tom for the ability to load it all, or atleast in larger parts as rediculous as it sounds. The MB would probably be over 100, but it would keep my attention, more so than right now. This is a great artwork, a tad on the cheesey side, in my opinion, but all great things are. My thesis would be to just add more linear dynamics to an episode, leave us with more questions, while answering some, not the same ones that we've had since the previous episodes. I enjoy your art direction, and am really pleased to see the series got voices.