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Oct 5, 2011 | 4:49 PM EDT
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Jan - Caxx
Armand - Neo Skywalker
Lhasa - Karen Kahler


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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

almost perfect

Really enjoyed this chapter. the voice overs and slick animation came as a nice surpise too. I say almost perfect because the was a bit of background noise on Armand's voice recording and as everything else was so well polished it stuck out like a sore thumb. But no doubt that would be sorted on the next episode. Also It could be a good idea to go back and redo the previous chapters in the same vein as this one, purely to tie all the chapters together. Great work. Looking forward to chapter 6

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

LOVED IT: but it needs a few things

Okay, i love the new "start menu", the whole voice and animation takes the series to a whole new level of awesomeness, now, things you should consider, subs, you know for people that don't completely understand the language, or for the Spanish speakers, and a pause button would be lovely, besides that, keep up the good work dude, i like where this its going


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Top Notch All Round...

Though this is the first chapter that I'm seeing, (don't know why) I've found that the art, the script, voice overs and fundamental camera perspectives to be quite remarkable for a project that's basically done by one person. Everything seems to be done with great care and precision and I hope for the best in future endeavors concerning this series and other distributions of your work, along with those who were a part of this project.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


Excellent development of the story, absolutely loved this episode. CANNOT WAIT for the next one!



Rated 5 / 5 stars


You really out did your selves when it came to this chapter. The animation was very nice and fluid, the voice acting, was clear and matched perfectly. when i heard that you were gonna make this series into a animation instead of the style you used to use. I figured that it was gonna be better but still be kinda choppy, but to my pleasant surprise it was incredibly smooth. I cant wait for the next chapter, great job and good luck to you. Full scores for you my friend. ^^