PTSD Haiku
Author Comments
Please Watch more than 10 seconds before you critique. this is a 3 1/2 minute flash that is on a sensitive subject.
We were assigned this project in my flash class as a midterm assignment. We needed to write a Haiku, so I wrote what I know about, PTSD. I have nightmares every night so I don't really like sleep. This was a way to get some of it out.
All of the music in the video is recorded by me. and the War Sounds were orchestrated by me. I am more of a music person, than the visual side but I enjoyed the challenge of putting this together.
I do realize the Artwork in here could be better but give me a break this is my first true flash that I have done.
If you like the music, I have all of my albums Free right now @ Http://MrAcousticD.bandca mp.com
Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 5, 2011
True...
your animation wasn't the best, but the message or I should say, your feelings shined through. I am truly sorry for what you went through, my best friend from high school only finally got over "it" 5 years later...source: my experience OIF 06 & OEF 10 Keep posting!
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 5, 2011
Brilliant pathos
While the animation was a bit choppy, the story structure was paced brilliantly and you feel exactly what the main character feels. It's good you got the courage to bring this out.
Rated 4 / 5 stars October 5, 2011
Next time.
Next time make text not selectable, make something with colors and...a good song. Agree with review before me - if you're still in school - it's very good work! Keep it up...In school time I even didn't knew - what is Flash)))
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 5, 2011
i was a lil generous
considering your still in school obviously for this... what mostly got you brownie points was the story although short i saw brief animation sequences which captured the climate like when he shuffled himself against the wall. Id like to see you continue this and work a little longer on the art. I know deadlines suck... keep at it