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Oct 4, 2011 | 11:44 PM EDT

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Please Watch more than 10 seconds before you critique. this is a 3 1/2 minute flash that is on a sensitive subject.
We were assigned this project in my flash class as a midterm assignment. We needed to write a Haiku, so I wrote what I know about, PTSD. I have nightmares every night so I don't really like sleep. This was a way to get some of it out.
All of the music in the video is recorded by me. and the War Sounds were orchestrated by me. I am more of a music person, than the visual side but I enjoyed the challenge of putting this together.
I do realize the Artwork in here could be better but give me a break this is my first true flash that I have done.

If you like the music, I have all of my albums Free right now @ Http://MrAcousticD.bandca mp.com

Reviews


RSXZero4RSXZero4

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 5, 2011

True...

your animation wasn't the best, but the message or I should say, your feelings shined through. I am truly sorry for what you went through, my best friend from high school only finally got over "it" 5 years later...source: my experience OIF 06 & OEF 10 Keep posting!



yoshimicksteryoshimickster

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 5, 2011

Brilliant pathos

While the animation was a bit choppy, the story structure was paced brilliantly and you feel exactly what the main character feels. It's good you got the courage to bring this out.



ShadebornShadeborn

Rated 4 / 5 stars October 5, 2011

Next time.

Next time make text not selectable, make something with colors and...a good song. Agree with review before me - if you're still in school - it's very good work! Keep it up...In school time I even didn't knew - what is Flash)))



corvantheannetworkcorvantheannetwork

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 5, 2011

i was a lil generous

considering your still in school obviously for this... what mostly got you brownie points was the story although short i saw brief animation sequences which captured the climate like when he shuffled himself against the wall. Id like to see you continue this and work a little longer on the art. I know deadlines suck... keep at it


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