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Fourth Hank. This was the first cartoon where I started the trend of making the first scene and then waiting a year before I finish the rest.
I didn't know what to vote on this.
The animation is horrible, the drawings are repulsive and the music is annoying.
It's one of those "so bad it's just sad" submissions.
And for some reason I have the feeling it will pass.
So in order for you to improve:
-Learn better design techniques, do a tutorial or two...For gods sake man.
-Get better music. Not some shitty tunes you mashed up on your piano. Something from the audio portal with a decent score please!
-Have better content.
Anyway, I hope you get better. I hate shit like this.
It reminds me of my first submission that passed and I wish people were harsher to me back in the day.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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