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I made this animation for my Programming/Animation class; it was my first time attempting a full-length animated video so let me know what you guys think please! :D But please if you must be critical please be constructive? ^-^;
Adobe Flash Professional CS5= Sound Library
I liked it. Your effort is clear and the story is simple and easy to follow.
a bit of criticism: Work on your timing some. Vary the speed of your movements. this is a gradual skill you will develop but its best if you call attention to it now. Observe the way a person actually walks. The way they move their arms. The varying speed of their legs.
I suggest doing a few drop tests (sack, leaf, brick) or a ball bounce test to better your skills. Just youtube search these things.
For these tests I also suggest you dont bother coloring them. I know it sounds silly but not adding color will help you focus on the lesson you are attempting to teach yourself.
You nailed story though. Telling a clear story is one of the hardest aspects of animation. Watching an emerging animator is one of the greatest joys of this site. Keep up the good work.
Thanks man I will try that! :D
First time animation? No wai
For a first flash, this is amazing. Sure, it lags a bit between tweens, but the animations are still fluid.
I can't wait until your second flash video :D
"Good animation and random ideas"
To be honest you have good animation but your ideas should be more on focused than random. Start out with a good script.
Yah it was a bit random, simply because it was just a assignment and I had limited time to put my ideas together. Thanks though!
I found it quite amusing. The animation is fairly simple but it works. I love the sound effects. The pogo stick sound makes me laugh.
Thanks a bunch!
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