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Sep 27, 2011 | 5:46 AM EDT

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Okay guys, this is my FIRST flash animation ever. Basically I just opened up a 30 day trial of Adobe Flash Maker and just played around with it. I just want some feedback, and if you guys like it, I might buy the full version and work on some longer flash animations. For the moment, just enjoy the video. :)

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TeddyrifficTeddyriffic

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars September 27, 2011

Decent stick fight

I am not too fond of stick fights since there is a huge amount of them on newgrounds and most of them end up being garbage but this one is an exception . It's fairly fast paced , cool moves and realistic . The sound effects were used very well , good work !



MOA-OZZYMOA-OZZY

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 27, 2011

Not bad

First animation? im impressed, i did my first animation when i was 15, now all you need to do is make a story line, characters, ideas for fight scenes... blah blah blah or you can try a different approach and make something that people wouldn't expect like comedy, randomness... i don't know, its all about your imagination, good luck with future animations



ZalfuriusZalfurius

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 27, 2011

Good

For your first animation this is pretty damn good, a bit more practice and I think you will nail the timings. I think you could also consider using more interesting sprites, something a little different from stickmen to set your animations apart from others.



LemonzXDLemonzXD

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 27, 2011

Not bad for the first :D

Very good flash, but since you had a 30 day limit i guess its shortness can't be helped. GO GET THE FULL VERSION AND MAKE MORE (Btw the dead blue and red sticks are weird, so make em like the orange and green)



MindrakerMindraker

Rated 2 / 5 stars September 27, 2011

OK!

Alright! You at least have some uniformity between your stick figures, which is head and shoulders above what else is on this web page.
Perhaps you could have the movie tell more of a "story" of sorts. Or include background music. Or tell when the story is over.


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