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Sep 26, 2011 | 11:51 PM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place September 28, 2011

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My first movie, hope you all enjoy.

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ScrewClockScrewClock

Rated 5 / 5 stars April 15, 2014

wow, this was an amazing flash Cheesesteak. excellent writing by patriot also. i was wondering how those two story lines would come together and wow, just powerful



KnuckstrikeKnuckstrike

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 1, 2011

Way better than I expected

I can't see much that can be done better in this flash. You made perfect use of the song, and with the great graphics the superb quality of the flash stood out even more.

It was also original. Those two stories blending in with each other is something I hadn't seen before.

I was hoping for more of a connection between the two stories though. If you would've made a crazy plot twist like the boy kidnapping her, or if one of the two actually was part of the war (like a master criminal or something), it would be even more special. Don't get me wrong, it isn't like it lowers the quality of the flash, but now the connection between the two stories seems a bit too small.

The bombs commiting suicide and the globe opening the doors for the girl are things that show that you put time and effort in this flash. The music creates tension, and the great graphics completely finishes it off. Great.


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XsakuXXsakuX

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 31, 2011

Great Music, Great Animation!

This is really amazing :]

The animation looks great, and I really loved how much detail was here; The song worked beautifully with the visuals. The story was really good, and spoke for itself for the most part. I also really appreciated how through you were with your details, as they were very obviously present from beginning to end :]
(loved the credits song as well, as it's a personal favorite of mine)

For your first movie, this is very well done dude :)

Things to take a second look at:
- Certain things could have used a bit more detail; The scene where Orange Clock closes his eyes one last time.

Besides that; Seriously a Gem of a submission
~Sonik

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SCTE3SCTE3

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 30, 2011

Excellence

Well I liked this one a lot since it was mixed to go with the song as well I see. It seems this one had some nice perspective details such as the bullet being viewed from different angles as it killed the last member of the small division seeking out to go somewhere in the night too. Very heartbreaking at the end I think.

The animation was very well done here, nothing else need be said on it. The song of choice was also very well too. Good band in my opinion anyways.

The story starts with two lovers/friends going to a theater to watch a movie about toast going on an adventure. Then it shows two divisions preparing for the night with weapons and as the helicopter is destroyed along with the people the two friends finish watching the movie and head home.

The ending of it ends up sad as the pink blob and the orange cat clock were actually lovers and they would never see each other again which made it all the more sadder. At least she has a friend with her to make her feel better when she would likely later receive the news of him dying tragically.

Overall, very well woven story played with a song that allows two stories to go at once with the constant change in tempo and rhythm. Very well done and written piece. Heart breaking tear jerking end however makes you feel sad.

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HaggardHaggard

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 30, 2011

Excellent

A very good flash. The plot is amazing and I have to say the ending was unexpected and very sad. But on the other hand, this is how life can go sometimes. It's not always sunshine and lollipops.

The musical choice was excellent as well. It fits really well into the context of the movie. I also like that you reduced the quality of the song to keep the filesize low. I'm annoyed by all those authors that put high quality MP3's into a 5 second flash movie, boosting the filesize to over 9MB.

Next thing I liked was the backgrounds. Very nice details there, even showing other clocks going into the cinema and watching the newest flick about ToastedToastyToast and showing other clocks in combat.

Overall, this totally deserves the daily 5th!

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