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Need constructive criticism.
Art and animation was okay...
but what is the point of this?
Can't seem to understand the story your trying to show...
Well, it's just my first attempt at my characters being in an animation. I don't know how to help with the story, should I add dialogue?
but all it needs is som carractor intridution or devlopment and or a plot and then it would be epic
So what can I do to improve it?
Epic end :)
I like it!
I have no idea what's going on in this...
But that's not necessarily a bad thing.
This was cool and action packed, but the art was lacking something.
Where does the wool come from?
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