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Sep 17, 2011 | 1:26 AM EDT

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Need constructive criticism.

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123mine123123mine123

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Art and animation was okay...

but what is the point of this?
Can't seem to understand the story your trying to show...


Siojinettes responds:

Well, it's just my first attempt at my characters being in an animation. I don't know how to help with the story, should I add dialogue?


Drifter7741Drifter7741

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

very good

but all it needs is som carractor intridution or devlopment and or a plot and then it would be epic


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Siojinettes responds:

So what can I do to improve it?


samu10400samu10400

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Epic end :)

I like it!



DeadBroadcastDeadBroadcast

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I have no idea what's going on in this...

But that's not necessarily a bad thing.
This was cool and action packed, but the art was lacking something.