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Animation by: Noah DiNardo
Art by: Noah DiNardo
Its not bad
but it just looks like you took pictures off of google, erased their backgrounds and put them in your flash, maybe if they had better expressions which shows, fear, anger, success, instead of just that one face they have you would get a better rating. Also just because someone doesn't have flash content doesn't mean you shouldn't listen to them for criticism, Flash is hard at the beginning, but if you don't respect other peoples reviews you become like someone called MikeyS9607, not many people like him because he won't listen to criticism.
Have a good day, and I hope your animations become greater.
No offense, but
Wile-E's exppression doesn't change throughout the movie, at all. Except for his mouth... just a small bit, his expression doesn't change. Not even when he sees he is about to smack into a canyon.
The objects that weren't traced, I actually had some trouble identifying. For example, I had to basically guess what that lump was in the beginning of the movie. I assume it was a tumbleweed, like the thing the coyote hid behind before the mailbox(?) exploded.
The flow from one gag to the next was faster than how long it'd take to properly absorb what was going on the first time. I had to watch it twice to figure out what had actually happened, and I'm still not sure.
It's nothing that hasn't been done before, but the movie would have gotten a higher score for me if it didn't look cheaply traced. That really hurt it. Sorry. :/
Nothing was traced.The Background was cheap drawing i know that But my second im working on looks better. and the exppressions i might change more sometime
You also dont even have any flash or art Posted so you dont understand that its hard.
Going back, one last time...
Detective Nwar untangles a massive copycat kidnapping conspiracy.
Joel runs out of shivs. Surley Ellie is not carrying anything that'll help him
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