Ultimate Gear War
Join the alien war, prepare your gear and protect your base at all cost!
4.22 / 5.00 14,371 ViewsThis one is best with your volume up. The words to the narration are below:
My dear father died in a faraway war
Left Mother and I quite without hope
We used our last pennies to leave our fine city
And away to a house on a farm.
And on this farm, on the thorniest edge
Stood an ash tree as old as the earth
With branches so gnarled and twisted and black
That my every bone cried out to climb
"But no! Oh no!" said our funny old neighbor
Wringing her hands like two rags
"Don't you go near it, young Miss Eliza
For her roots are bad all the way down."
I thought it silly but did as she told
Until Mother went missing one eve
So sad had she been that I feared the worst
And went down to the old ash tree
And now here I stand but here there is nothing
Naught but a flowering weed
But the breeze, I could swear, carries upon it
The scent of my mother's perfume
Yes, the wind, I declare, does carry upon it
The scent of my mother's perfume
Reviews
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 5, 2013
what a family tree,good job
Rated 5 / 5 stars September 2, 2012
that was good
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 26, 2012
I liked it. Had a nice and creepy vibe to it. Keep up the good work!
Rated 4 / 5 stars August 24, 2012
Very nice. Was hoping for a rhyme, that would have really made it haunting.
Nice story. Visuals suited it very well too. Siplistic and lonely. Perfect. :D
Rated 5 / 5 stars July 3, 2012
If I knew this was so creepy I wouldn't have watched it in the dark at 1 AM. Cool (and haunting).