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Sep 13, 2011 | 10:12 PM EDT
  • Daily 4th Place September 15, 2011

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This one is best with your volume up. The words to the narration are below:

My dear father died in a faraway war
Left Mother and I quite without hope
We used our last pennies to leave our fine city
And away to a house on a farm.
And on this farm, on the thorniest edge
Stood an ash tree as old as the earth
With branches so gnarled and twisted and black
That my every bone cried out to climb
"But no! Oh no!" said our funny old neighbor
Wringing her hands like two rags
"Don't you go near it, young Miss Eliza
For her roots are bad all the way down."
I thought it silly but did as she told
Until Mother went missing one eve
So sad had she been that I feared the worst
And went down to the old ash tree
And now here I stand but here there is nothing
Naught but a flowering weed
But the breeze, I could swear, carries upon it
The scent of my mother's perfume
Yes, the wind, I declare, does carry upon it
The scent of my mother's perfume



Rated 5 / 5 stars


That was scary! I'm glad I watched this during the day lol


Rated 5 / 5 stars


So freaky. I loved it!


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Here's what I think...

+The art style wasn't half bad, nothing I can really complain about.

+The idea was a solid one, creepy premise and everything.

- The narration was rather weak, in both tone and delivery. The narrator was reading with a rhyming scheme when no rhyming words were present. This seems to be more along the lines of free-verse and not rhyme poetry (if its even poetry.)

- You need a better voice actor/ your voice actor needs more practice


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

this is not scary

it`s everyone rated and nothing even happens


Rated 4 / 5 stars


although it's a well written scheme, and has rather tasteful artistic style to it, i didn't enjoy the voice it was told in. Nevertheless i'm looking forward to more.

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