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Sep 13, 2011 | 10:12 PM EDT
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This one is best with your volume up. The words to the narration are below:

My dear father died in a faraway war
Left Mother and I quite without hope
We used our last pennies to leave our fine city
And away to a house on a farm.
And on this farm, on the thorniest edge
Stood an ash tree as old as the earth
With branches so gnarled and twisted and black
That my every bone cried out to climb
"But no! Oh no!" said our funny old neighbor
Wringing her hands like two rags
"Don't you go near it, young Miss Eliza
For her roots are bad all the way down."
I thought it silly but did as she told
Until Mother went missing one eve
So sad had she been that I feared the worst
And went down to the old ash tree
And now here I stand but here there is nothing
Naught but a flowering weed
But the breeze, I could swear, carries upon it
The scent of my mother's perfume
Yes, the wind, I declare, does carry upon it
The scent of my mother's perfume

Reviews


YourInfectionYourInfection

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Dear Gawd..

This made me feel like I was being watched... D:



SalutneroSalutnero

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Holy Carp!

That was pretty scary!!!



kharlanwarriorkharlanwarrior

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

creepy

really creepy even though its so short. The voice really gets to me



SeankielySeankiely

Rated 3 / 5 stars

hmmm

i dont get it but the lady sounds like she smokes alot



SaminaggSaminagg

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Not as creepy as I expected

Though it's probably more creepy when the lights aren't turned on. I like the plot even though it was short. The poetry feeling that came with it was good. But I didn't like the fact that she was whispering the whole time, if it would have been an old woman talking I'd be freaking out now.