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Canned Soup needs a place to stay and Taco lets him stay over at his place. Been working on this one for a little while. Mainly planning.
Good story, art, voices, music etc.
I like the Soup eyes, they give quite a bit of expression.
I didn't get what expression Taco was supposed to have on the doorstep- mouth full?
You created a good atmostphere in the Guest room.
The ending is a familiar endpoint- I am intrigued to imagine where you would go from this if you did continue. I think its time to develop the characters a bit beyond "Taco is gay and fancies Canned", though- we got that idea- it s OK its just time for more- perhaps time to develop another character or two.
Sorry to reduce your review score, I always review honestly, but at least I raised your /5 score!
I agree about the character thing.
A short film about a park bench
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