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This is just a short pokemon parody I made. I know it needs improvement. Anyway, the main plot is:
Pikachu kills another pokemon in a game of poker, and the police come after him and Ash. They then retreat to Las Vegas...
This video to be honest sucks but i watch that mouse vs mouse video and it was better so i hope in the near future you eventually get to the point where you are a great animator
Yeah... this does suck, but if you liked mouse vs mouse, then... why didn't you just review that?
The animation was no good it was stale and showed no liveliness it looks like simple frame by frame with just using the free transform tool. I know you tried your best, and I know your still learning so I don't really think this was unexpected from you; your new to flash so stuff like this is natural.
Anyways it was a bit funny I understood the joke. The story was clear and easy to follow. The music was nice though it was looping after the animation and that could be a problem for when someone chooses to watch it again.
Overall I'd say this wasn't a good flash but this being one of your first flashes I'd say you did alright. Try to work harder and you'll eventually make better stuff.
To put it nicely...
It needs work. It has it's potential but it undoubtably needs work. Keep working eventually you'll get there.
To not put it nicely, it's a piece of shit, right?
Fantastic, I liked it when the plane crash, with all the passengers dying in a fiery explosion. Could of added some cheese. That would of earned you a 10.
Needs to be redone
If you really take more time to overhaul this and polish it then it could be good, nice idea just with poor execution.
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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