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I got tired by the end.
Well animated, but almost pointless.
The animation was great and very fluid, but the Flash as a whole was poorly structured.
It was only about 30 seconds long - but that's not the problem - you could have added some little sequence to it at the end to finish it off, because it's just completely unfinished it's not exactly worth uploading, even if you got tired at the end of making it.
The animation is good - keep that up - and the idea of some sort of 'Back to school' movie is a good idea, because it's something most can relate to especially at this time of year.
If you finished it and made more of a story out of it, it may have been good. Not much to say after that.
Wow, great review! Thanks a lot!
Not sure what happend?!?!?! but some intersting animation at the begining. good job keep it up :D!!!
I have to stop having high expectations.
Animation at the beginning got me interested, but I don't know what happened after that.
The face at the start changed shape and size a lot, and it was a bit annoying. However, the basic movements was pretty well done, and for the first bit the animating was pretty good.
The idea wasn't that great, and the fact that it was so short didn't help a lot.
Just work on keeping size consistent and work a bit on the art.
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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