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well aware this is very late but compiling this thing was hell, and i didnt even finish the animation itself till clockday... it exists.
For those of you who want to see it in a larger format you may do so here:
Like others have mentioned this is a strange Clock Day submission in that it's very different from any of the other submissions. Something I do appreciate about this submission was the effort put into it obviously, especially the hand-drawn parts.
Some of them seemed a bit too short or incomplete, though considering that compiling something like this would be hard I would understand why you wouldn't want to expand on it, and the songs during the short skits were very nice.
Thanks man ! :D
Yeah I really did what I could to put this one together, I only started drawing it up randomly a few days before clock day , and with my old laptop scanning and importing the pics was a loong process :(
Thanks for the review dude!
To start this off I thought this was an ok Clock-Day animation. Untill I looked at the title. YOU MADE IT WITH POST-ITS?! I really wasn't paying much attention I was just thinking ohh he made a rough draft but then I saw you made it with post-its. I really liked it. I can't wait to see more Clock-Day animations. :3
Thanks Man ! I just may have to try to expand the premise this year ;D
Now before i get started on the details and such, I just wanted to say a few things in a more enlightening way of the flash, first off it was a refreshing flash entry and showed off some decent skills here and there and whatnot, So for what i got out of this it was pretty positive, allthough later you will find some helpfull ideas, tips and suggestions that may help make it even better so try them aout and never be afraid to try new stuff. So first great job on this "CLOCK-DAY" Entry its always a fun day and see what comes thru, The differant toons you have here are all kinda neat and quite enjoyble, so it was nice that you added a few short animations in one flash that is good quality controll, The animation here was abit differant i guess because it was more then animation but i do like how you presented this, it was interesting though, Audio was pretty good here there was a "WIDE" mixture of audio uses and such wich actually made it alright so that was something good, There was some "STATIC" Sounds with some of the music but it was little to non, and not a real issue, And i guess the whole "VIEW-SCREEN" could be larger it would allow for more detail to show and bring a tad more quality to everything. And so here we have something differant and with everything going on you really bring out the quality,So i am loving the unique style and it stillbrings some entertainment value and that was all a plus, and really just kept me interested from the getgo, so props to you on a decent flash submission here, hope to see more from you. Ok so here it is in a nutshell as some may say, thiswas notbad, and there is some room for making things better and or improving on a few points, both positive and negitive points in this flash, but i liked it all, but anyways here are one or two ideas and improving on this would be great.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I actually found this to be an entertaining flash sumbmission, I did see a couple of things that could have been re-worked with a tad more effort, so i gone ahead to try and find some lacking points and do hope you consider looking into them as it will just add more quality, but anyways heres an idea or two. Some static was around but it was not a big thing maybe some looking into this would be great.and a larger view screen would be a plus.
Thanks for the very fair review - I'd very much like to try this type again sometime soon =/ but I think larger paper will have to be used, probably animation paper and I have a higher quality camera these days so maybe it will be epic if I have a chance
This was random. Kinda like robot chicken. The screen size should be bigger though. Alot of this needs color though. I still enjoyed this though.
Keep it up?
this is as raw as it gets ladies and gentlemen
Ya that was raw
I've always thought flip-book animation was the tits. This is however mediocre imo. Maybe it went to quick for me to see all the frames, maybe there weren't many frames, whatever it was, I didn't see much animation, mostly just a start and a finish with an occasional single, middle-frame.
because of the thickness of the paper i could only do pose 2 pose animation and i started doing this for the fuck of it a day or 2 before clockday... but there at least 50 drawn frames. This was not to create an epic masterpiece as much as it was just to fill up a movie, glad it has some entertainment value tho
A short film about a park bench
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