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This is the new intro for my new season of zombies called ONE OF ZOMBIES 2, even though I do not think the subtitle and now will be made %u200B%u200Bwith flash
I find your confusing mess of what you call an Artist Comments section. It's one thing to put nothing, It's another to put random words. In fact you sound like a child. I am assuming you meant "Why don't now (or know?) what say (.or?)" No matter how I look at it that makes no sense, I am assuming you could have meant "I don't know what to say" Awful lot of mistakes in the beginning. It also does it add to your flash you may as well have had nothing.
Bitching aside I do kind of like this flash
The art seemed Amateur, which is not a bad thing everyone starts out somewhere, I would suggest working on drawing anatomy. The flash seems pretty good, minus some choppy areas, the song seems to fit in well with the clip (until it loops.) Some sound effects would have been nice but I am glad you didn't use horrible cheep sound effects that everyone uses.
Over all it is a decent flash, You should learn some English (or just type in whatever language you speak, we have Google for a reason) And work on the art a bit. With time I could see a great improvement.
I hope I've helped
If you've used pivot (as i think you have) you deserve the stars i give you now, since i know how difficult it is to use.
Oh and you get 1+ star for using a japanese song.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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