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teh lady,old man,&cookie

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rated 1.87 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original
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Uploaded
Aug 23, 2011 | 11:22 AM EDT

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Author Comments

3rd flash! This time longer, and a story taken from a wise person!
This took me a very long time to make, but helpful reviews and tips always a good help!
Pls. don't blam! And thanks to all of you guys for giving encouraging words from my previous flash!
And yeah I know I suck at drawing...
But pls enjoy it!

Reviews


harri21hiharri21hi

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Nice

Lol nice animation it was pretty funny and true and the art and animation was very good. I can't believe this is your 3rd you are much better than me at flash!!! not joking!! This is fantastic for a third man!


123mine123 responds:

Thank you!!! Your also good at flash.


Food123Food123

Rated 5 / 5 stars

great movie

what you eat is yours and what others eat is theirs. nice job making this movie.


123mine123 responds:

Hey food! Thanks!


SoapbubbleSoapbubble

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

All right

Not a bad attempt at flash, considering it's only your 3rd proper flash.

Main problem for me isn't necessarily the bad graphics, but the lack of voice acting, which I'd love to hear. The writing looks out of place, and really ruins the flow of the flash.

In addition to that, of course, there's the graphics, which you need to improve on. Same goes for animations, really, you're using a lot of tweening, which looks very unnatural when it comes to humans moving.


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123mine123 responds:

Bad graphics - Yup!!! It sucks!
Too much tweening - I'm too lazy using FBF :P
Voice acting - I'm homeschool and don't have a lot of friends.
Needs a lot improvement huh?
Anyway, I made a new flash, very short and because I'm bored, and first time doing lip-syc. Pls review and tell me what you think! :)


Falconer02Falconer02

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

not bad

I think this story would have been better without the words though-- if you could convey the message w/o any text being displayed, you could have mastered storytelling! You did it pretty well up to that point. Work on the art a little more and you'll get some 10s!


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123mine123 responds:

i suck at drawing.....
oh well. thanks for tips and reviewing!


wolfkywolfky

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good

Hey that was a good 3rd animation your getting better! :D.


123mine123 responds:

hey its you! thanks for telling me I'm getting better...
working on a new flash... this time doing some lip-sycing... :)
Good luck to you too!