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Hey guys, finally got enough free time to finish this episode! I feel this is worlds better than the last animation I did. Hope to hear some feedback! :D
Fixed the video quality :D
hey there buddy your drawings are quite good ya know. I think perhaps just a bit more smoother animation is in order. the music and voice acting was good. Keep up the great work.
A very nice story you've got there. The writing and voice acting was beautiful (gd job to EyesAdrift), very good story and quite a match for your character. Unfortunately, I couldn't say the same for the art though. Although the actual art is fine, apart from the gritty backgrounds and characters, its the animation that gets me... Tweening different body parts looks good in some places (like the beginning), but it is far overused and sometimes becomes anatomically impossible (like the girl near the end bending her elbow... somewhere) although the animation (like the jump out the window) is really smooth and realistic.
The flash was... disappointingly short though... I really wanted to see more... for a teaser it works but I don't think it would qualify for an episode, but i can't wait until you expand on this. Hopefully it would give you a chance to improve your animation style. Kudos.
Like I said when I read the script man, I really dig the concept, the art was pretty damn good too. However we need to find a better way to compress the audio so it keeps the quality but no where near the size. I think I sent you a .wav, I'll do .mp3 from now on. I'll get you in contact with a few other people so we can figure this out.
Good job though man.
Thanks! I literally spent all day yesterday animating, so much fun!!
A short film about a park bench
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