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I do stuff and things. I suck at stuff so I compensate with things.
fish out of water, fish out of water that makes it all look funny
not bad :)
You obviously put great time and effort on this, and I thought it was pretty cool. However, I totally understand why others didn't like it (well, not to the point of giving a 0... this is NOT a zero rating work AT ALL). It was too confusing. The purpose of the animation was a guy sleeping and dreaming on a math class, ok, but even considering this it was waay too far out. Even on a surprising and random animation there must be some common ground, we must understand where you are coming from with that.
I mean, a little story in the begining, with just simple details so we can grasp it better, could help the viewers understand it better, since we get throw in the middle of that out of nowhere. Oh, and btw, in no way would I prefer a weak spouse, where did you get that from? lol
And hey, only thing I hated: that door bell thing when you select "play" or "scene selection". The rest was pretty great! Congratulations!
Heh, pretty good.
I'm probably no one to judge since i still need more practice. But i can't still give off pointers. Like, if you can, try increasing your voice clips a bit more, If the music or background noise is larger than a character's voice, then you have prob.
That's possibly the only thing that bothers me, also the long explanations. Yet again, there is always things like that in everything. :/
Ehh, got to work on your comedy just a bit more. And your animation style is good.
I don't see why this or anything else would get a rating like you said in the description. I think you did a great job, all of you. ^^ Keep up the great work.
I couldn't change the volume of the voice clips in time and I won't let that happen in future episodes.
I know my comedy definitely needs work, though I must say jokes were never my top priority.
Thanks for the feedback.
its alright, the respawn scene was kinda funny(only the end of it) but other than that it was pretty boring. I did really like the characters design and outfits though.
Thanks! I was waiting for someone to compliment the character designs ^^
A short film about a park bench
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