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I do stuff and things. I suck at stuff so I compensate with things.
Couldn't even finish it.
I'm generally very forgiving compared to many other reviewers and am willing to completely let some things slide as 'design comparison'.
Your art was great, and the part of the voice I heard gave me the impression that real effort was put into this, but I had to stop it about 30 seconds in.
The background music is HORRIBLY loud. I heard someone talking, but without the subs I never would have known what was actually being said. It hurt my head to try watching this, so I stopped.
Grr I am sorry about that and I will try to turn the music down. Totally sorry about that ^^;
fish out of water, fish out of water that makes it all look funny
Is this going anywhere?
So in 7 episodes, all they've managed to get done is meet each other, meet some other people, go to town, and arrive at the amusement park. Please speed it up. All they do is talk for most of each episode.
My thoughts so far:
1. The biggest draw to this is the sexy way you drew the women. At least we can look at them as we're waiting for SOMETHING to happen.
2. The pace is way too slow. Please speed it up and have them actually DO SOMETHING.
3. Please change the 'doorbell' sound as you hit the buttons in the beginning!!
4. Watch the volume. The background music is often loud enough that it makes the people hard to follow.
I used to say "Oh great! Another one!" but now it's "Oh great, what now." :\
I would like to change the doorbell sound, but it's just so much of a hassle. I will probably do it sometime soon.
I will turn down the music also.
I am uhm... sorry about the very slow pace. I suppose I did make the conversations go a bit too long...
Sorry to say, but most of this episode is talking since it is the character's vacation and the episode is 14 chapters long so yeah. But due to your comments, I will definitely make the next episode much more action packed.
Thanks for your constant feedback.
its alright, the respawn scene was kinda funny(only the end of it) but other than that it was pretty boring. I did really like the characters design and outfits though.
Thanks! I was waiting for someone to compliment the character designs ^^
A short film about a park bench
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