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I do stuff and things. I suck at stuff so I compensate with things.
The reason I like this series so much is because if you stick around long enough, you here some brilliant social commentary. On women, on celebrities, on relationships... it's simply brilliant, and the reason I watch these things.
Only thing: your commentary is placed in large blocks which take up a lot of time and start to become boring, as well as majorly distracting from the plot. Integrating commentary into the action, or at least adding action to the commentary, would make it a little easier to swallow.
And while your continued video game commentary is smart, it holds no purpose in character development, plot development, or even in supplementing humor: it grows old and leaves the viewer a little confused. A few jokes here and there, or an entire flash centered around it, would be more appropriate, I think.
That said, I love the social commentary, love the characters; love the amazing imagination and originality in it all. Well done.
Very good art, story & sound. OK music
Animation so-so- There is nothing actually wrong with what is there, but the avoidance of animation gets a bit tiresome in a movie of this level.
The dialogue is mildly amusing and different. I am glad to have the detailed explanation that is in the notes, but really the movie should stand alone, without needing notes to explain itself.
I have to say that even after a replay, I had difficulty figuring out who the characters are, exactly, though I suppose that doesn't really matter- I will assume that becomes clearer in future episodes.
The voices are good quality - Though the pirate, although it is clear, has an inconsistant, weird accent- I decided to think of it as part of the humour.
Always good to have subtitles, despite clear speech, thank you. Glad they were well-written.
Lots of potential- I look forward to more.
Always put a replay button at the end.
Don't forget to encourage people to watch early episodes before viewing later ones by putting links in at the beginning. As you create new episodes, put links in the earlier ones so they go direct to the later ones.
Thanks for your extensive feedback, it is very much appreciated.
If it will help, I can sum up the characters in one word.
Naylu - the conspirator
Stradiff - the beatnik
Klyzed - the preacher
Pharris - the gangsta
Ghenter - the snitch
Yori - the goth
And also thanks for giving me the idea of linking this video to earlier episodes. I will get to work on that right away!
too much no t interesting
it needs masacreXD
Storyline was odd. Characters aren't bad. Stereotypes are prevalent.
But what the heck is the music?
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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