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Eulogy For 'a clocks voice'

This entry was blammed by our users.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

08-15-11 – 03-14-12

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just a silly clock day submission, I know I am not a ember of the clocks now, and that I didnt include the preloader, but please accept this as my clock day animation.

I hope you will enjoy the animation and please comment

(EDIT) Sorry I didnt change this sooner but, special thanks to rina-chan for doing the voice of the tomatoclock

Reviews


CoopCoop

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Interesting take

Well, the clocks would think that a voice like TomatoClock's is strange. It's female, for starters. Most of the voices on Speakonia are male, if I remember right. Still, you've produced a very nicely displayed piece, that really gets to the heart of a good idea.

The animation could have been taken a little further, with the love interest, before you went all Monty Python on the scene and dropped a massive clock face, instead of the more traditional giant foot.

Still, it pays decent homage to it and overall, I think you're on to something here. Potential is shown in this piece, but I'd love to see you make slightly more of it, overall. Perhaps some dialogue between Tomato and her love interest.

Also, the dance of CeleryClock (?) to a polka was weird and uncalled for. I laughed, but then the piece just looped. Do you thin you should have a proper start screen, so that people have the option to replay it, instead of just launching into it.

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Michaely385Michaely385

Rated 5 / 5 stars

This is kinda awesome.

I really kinda like it.
This is kinda awesome.

I am really suprised that how a clock that has a sweet girly voice that is voiced by Rina-chan.

I am really sure that i will know by the way make this the most greatest Clock Day submission.

I am really wishing that this Clock Day submission will be on the Clock Day 2011 collection on Newgrounds, so that people would know this pretty flash submission.

I am really noticing that how did you make this awesome.

This is so awesome that how in August 15, 2011.
This is will make this a huge hit on Newgrounds
And this will be on the 11th anniversary of B.

Wow, how awesome was that when i was looking for some reason things.
This will be great and this is so interesting.
The girly clock would make this so fascinating.

If Rina-Chan's voice wasn't that bad maybe she wasn't bad that she would not get blammed.

Therefore, this is so 1337.


NekoMikaNekoMika

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Interesting

Heh, Rina-Chan does excellent voice acting every time as well I think. Kind of sucks how it ends with her and her new friend being crushed by a giant clock. Wonder why they don't like normal voices, I guess it is hard to be accepted for who you are sometimes huh? Nice little short though.

The animation looks pretty rushed but I think the voice acting makes up for it though. Got a good laugh at the end where I though that Celery Clock character was going to loop but instead ended upside down with the flash restarted. Music was also good I think.

Overall, not too bad, just needs a replay and play button to keep it from looping is all.

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HaggardHaggard

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Clock Day Aftermath

Yet another good submission I missed on clock day. I like the idea of introducting a "normal" voice into the world of clocks. Of course they think the voice sucks, because all of the clocks talk with a very artificial voice.

The flash took a turn to the better when tomato clock found someone who loved her despite of her voice. Too bad they where crushed by a giant clock at the end, heh.

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PS: The tetris theme in the credits is awesome!


SoapbubbleSoapbubble

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Ah, clever

Not the best of flash, but considering it's a Clock Day flash, I'd say it's pretty impressive.

Once again, please add a play and replay button, I really don't like that it just loops.

Nice idea for a flash as well. Sure enough, a proper voice would be laughed at in the world of Clocktopia, considering the fact that everyone there has a Speakonia voice.

The graphics are as usual all right, but nothing special. You should really sit down and do some work on that, making it look more refined. Still no shading whatsoever on the clocks or the background.

I don't really understand the ending, however. I really hav eno idea why that happened.

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DreamEaterDreamEater

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Different :p

I definitely agree with Soapbubble on this one; This flash isn't the best on its own, but as a clock day submission It's alright.

The voice acting was pretty good, and generally followed everything that was going on.

The animation could definitely use some more work, detail, and fluidity though. maybe take some time to practice these things a little more, and put more effort into the next one. make your projects longer!

The potential is there, just clean it up a bit and make the next one slightly more lengthy? :p

Good Effort!
~Dj Sonik

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megakillmegakill

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Well, It was for clock day...

I'm going to be honest and explain that I've never been a fan of the clocks, and so, it's hard for me to judge this fairly, but I'll give it my best.

The story was undoubtedly original, but not particularly special, however It's only a short animation so of course I didn't expect some kind of epic adventure. I'd say good job on tackling something different.

The animation was poor. It was choppy, the characters looked a mess, the attention to detail was sub-par and all in all, it was uninspired and sloppy. That being said, at least I could tell what everything was, and its a lot better than just simple stick figures, so while it clearly isn't of a respectable standard, it's still not completely dismal. Sorry if that sounds a bit harsh, but I've got to be honest.

The sound wasn't bad. I can certainly appreciate your voice acting. I think you did a really good job there, however, the quality wasn't quite up to scratch. That being said, it was consistent in volume, didn't distort much, and synced up well.

It's a shame it doesn't have a pause feature, or any replay button. I appreciate that it loops, but it would have been nice for it to have stopped playing at the end, with a button to let you play it again if you wish.

So, five out of ten simply because the animation was quite poor, and there's nothing remarkable about it, except for the good voice acting.

Keep it up, and just try and spend a little more time on your work!

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NGChicken21NGChicken21

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

pretty awkward animation

i give this a 5 for nice acting for rina chan

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