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Happy clock day everyone! I didn't have much time to make a full length thing this year but hopefully this will suffice.
One thing remains
When I look,
And I find,
I still love you.
Touching, well delivered and with the usual clock crew off-the-wall madness in the middle there, we can all have a laugh, even at a poignant song like that, where I just go back to think of the god among homosexual singers that was Freddie Mercury.
Your animation style seems a little rushed, to get it all finished for today, no doubt, but then in the end, yiu have produced a decent effort, save for the ending. I'd work on tidying up the lines and making parts of the animation smoother. Is the clock supposed to have a triangular clock face, or is that to show sadness? If it's sadness, try curving the lines a bit, so it looks more emotional, rather than kitsch, like the 1970s clocks that your grandma used to bring back from Bulgaria, or somesuch.
The colour scheme was impressive, with the shades of grey - the only song that would have gone better with it would have been Whiter Shade of Pale, but that's getting too far into the metaphor, I suppose.
I'd like to see more and I'd like to see more polished pieces from you, you've got the talent, it would be a waste if you didn't use it!
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A man after my own heart i see, Freddie is the greatest.
Yeah it was kinda rushed haha, i was kinda busy with college work and a feeling of not-being-bothered. The clockface is triangular to fit in with the character of Triangleclock, the star of the movie. The colour scheme and Triangle's costume are directly based on the actual music video for this song by Queen.
Overall thanks for the feedback Coop, hopefully i'll have more time to make something for christmas :)
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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