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Aug 14, 2011 | 9:10 PM EDT

Author Comments

1st real cartoon I've done. Hope you enjoy it!
*Note* I did NOT write a script for this

I have read over some reviews and comments from my previous animations and I have tried to iron out some of the issues in this one. As they say "Practice Makes Perfect!"

Reviews


AppleJackAppleJack

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 15, 2011

dude this is freken hilarious!

i was laughing mah ass off the 300 black guy joke and the friken misllle looked like a dick two
nice animation


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SwedishPlumTreesSwedishPlumTrees

Rated 3 / 5 stars August 14, 2011

Pretty good.

I liked it. The story was cool and easy to understand. One thing I didn't like was the voice acting. A little bit of enthusiasm goes a long way. Also, breathing in the mic didn't help, but hey, atleast you had voice acting, so I give you props for that. All in all, I liked it, but it could've been better. 6.



ClimbLaddersClimbLadders

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 14, 2011

lol what?

Get 300 black people and have them jump and throw it back. I thought that was funny, I'm black btw.

Anyway, I thought it was a funny skit. Just back off the mic a lil bit.

Keep it up.


Comicalcartoon responds:

Yeah the mic is junk


dumbass64dumbass64

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 14, 2011

the best movie evar

the best


Comicalcartoon responds:

Wow thanks!


EarthmoverEarthmover

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars August 14, 2011

Good

You have talent, that's clear alright. But you need to get a better microphone, seriously, or just get a voice actor (you can find one in the forums). Anyways, good luck with your future flashes.


Comicalcartoon responds:

Thanks man! Yeah a new mic is a Priority right now