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30 hours of work for 3 second loop (animated illustration? .-.), but looks pretty good :)
Guys, tell me, if you like it or not, or what to improve.
Maybe I'll use her for something longer...or just in demo reel...
Yeah, it's a loop. It's not a bad loop, but it's just that. Doesn't really matter how good three seconds of something is, it's just three seconds - with no substance it's really just a technical demo.
Some of the smoothest animation I've seen on here, man. A little heavy on the motion blur though, don't ya think?
Brilliantly smooth, this is on par with some of the old 2D animated Disney movies. I have no idea how many frames this is but you might have been able to add some quick lighting effects to make it look a little more complete. I feel like it wouldn't have been that difficult if you spent 30 hours making what you have right now.
I also agree that there's a gigantic issue with the motion blur. I don't think that it's used too much, but it's not necessary in some places. For instance, when the model kicks, her entire body blurs instead of just her leg.
Looks good you should make an animated gif.
I like it, but there's too much motion blur.
Is this your first flash submission ever? If is, it's really good for it being your first flash submission. The animation is fantastic. The loop is perfect, after a while I couldn't tell when the loop began and when it ended.
I think this could be a really cool flash series. A girl that is a badass fighting random people attacking her, sort of like the madness series I guess.
You use WAY too much motion blur. Every movement she makes is blurred, and in my opinion that looks bad. I think you should cut down on it quite a bit.. you can still use it, but use it less. Like when she quickly moves the knife.
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