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Please note the game was previously stolen and submitted by someone else, if you liked it before I hope you will like it again! Many thanks to shadow6nothing9 for the music and the newgrounds community for its support!
WHERE THE HELL IS ORANGE!?!?!?!?!?
could be a bit easier. i searched every pixel but never found the last color. im probably gonna spend 3 quarters of my life trying to find it
The artist had a point to make....
...but didn't know how to make it.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not knocking the "story" or idea of the game. However, your theme is just as valid, if not more so, without 20 minutes of pointless slow platforming. As a video with some spiffed up animation I would have really enjoyed this piece. As a game (which is the category in which we are forced to critique this) it falls very flat.
Next time, speed up the movement a bit. Also add a bit of difficulty with the platforming. If you don't want jumps to be frustratingly difficult at least pump up the maze to add a bit of challenge. Also, when you return an item, it would be nice to get some kind of payoff. I know it adds color yada-yada, but we as gamers have ridiculously short attention spans and thus adding a bit more bang when we accomplish a goal gives us more to look forward to.
I believe in what you're saying, and I know you'll find the perfect way to make these statements. However, for me, this submission just didn't quite get there.
i hate this game
So, the music is nice, bit repetetive... graphics are okay, simple but effective.
The gameplay itself is far too slow and tedious & the 'reward' for spending time collecting items and giving them to the female character does not justify the means.
Overall I like the concept, but feel it needs a proper injection of pace to actually make this worthwhile playing. As it is it's just far too drawn out and lacklustre.
I understand completely, don't get me wrong, but that was an awful story. This is the story of a girl and the tool who loved her. How well do they know each other? We don't know, but we're willing to tear ourselves apart for her. Don't get me wrong, I would go to the ends of time for a girl, but not a girl who doesn't know I exist. I understood the blurring effect was symbolic for fading away and I didn't hate it, but after I noticed it, the ending was so predictable. I'm not amused. The piano is too twangy for my taste. It doesn't really blend with the soft aura this has. The melody is great, but wrong instrument. It gives me a headache. A four is about all I can give for the game mechanics working. Although how slow I was and the inability to pick up multiple items annoyed me, but I understand that was the point.
A rumor at an elementary school spirals out of control.
Have you ever thought Destiny was a little bit... fabulous?
A short about parties and socializing
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