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Please note the game was previously stolen and submitted by someone else, if you liked it before I hope you will like it again! Many thanks to shadow6nothing9 for the music and the newgrounds community for its support!
Good Concept: Boring Game
I think that the concept and Ideas that you have are great, story line is somewhat interesting, and the characters seem somewhat in depth. Now the problem comes with the actual game. You made it way to easy to navigate, there is no way to lose the game, and there was absolutely no challenge to the game. I would say that you made the graphics very fitting to the story, the controls where nice for the story, and the added elements made the game slightly more interesting but overall the game was just not exciting.
I would say that this is a game geared towards art and story, but not in the game. If you where to work on another: just improve on the difficulty. besides that great work I look forward to seeing more.
Eh, it was quite pretentious. It became obvious after the second item what's happening, but still have to walk and jump sloooowly alllll the way toooo and baaaaack from each item. I understand you were going more for the art route here, so should have just made the items closer.
It's meant to look like more than it is: Some melancholic piano sounds, black and white artwork that slowly becomes more colorful. Pseudo-emotional BS...
WHERE THE HELL IS ORANGE!?!?!?!?!?
could be a bit easier. i searched every pixel but never found the last color. im probably gonna spend 3 quarters of my life trying to find it
The artist had a point to make....
...but didn't know how to make it.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not knocking the "story" or idea of the game. However, your theme is just as valid, if not more so, without 20 minutes of pointless slow platforming. As a video with some spiffed up animation I would have really enjoyed this piece. As a game (which is the category in which we are forced to critique this) it falls very flat.
Next time, speed up the movement a bit. Also add a bit of difficulty with the platforming. If you don't want jumps to be frustratingly difficult at least pump up the maze to add a bit of challenge. Also, when you return an item, it would be nice to get some kind of payoff. I know it adds color yada-yada, but we as gamers have ridiculously short attention spans and thus adding a bit more bang when we accomplish a goal gives us more to look forward to.
I believe in what you're saying, and I know you'll find the perfect way to make these statements. However, for me, this submission just didn't quite get there.
What to expect when you're expecting (an acceptance letter)
Some magic frog BEATS!
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