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Here is just a small section of my favorite reviews ever! :D
Seems alright, kind of funny
Have you watched "Bahamut's favorite reviews"? This piece reminds me of that one minus the voice acting. Actually to be honest this could possibly a whole lot funnier if you had someone reading all of the reviews out loud to add to this piece.
I think one of the few flaws here is simply formatting. Could have added a secondary layer where the Newgrounds gray color is the background and made the size of the piece bigger so the bigger reviews shown are not having the text squeezed down so much though.
The music of choice was pretty nice and cheesy anyways. Liked that anyways. Also the medals were alright although I don't see much of a point to them here since it's just for viewing a couple of things, who knows, they could be approved, maybe not. At least with the yellow box backgrounds you had in there the font looked like the one used on the forums too.
Overall, nice for a good little chuckle anyways. Just need to work on the formatting a bit is all. Also could possibly add some voice acting to the reviews to add a bit more humor. Not bad though.
Review Request Club
Needs better formatting
I know it can be difficult to get the piece sorted for when you're publishing screen shots of a game, but there is one major issue here - the larger reviews get all squashed up, thus giving more face time to the short reviewer.
I'd have made the screen bigger, to accommodate the largest review and then used blank space (Newground background colours) for the empty space on the smaller reviews. Spending a little time marrying the review to the standard background could be useful as well, as it makes it look better.
Have you considered a voice actor to read out these reviews? I think that I could do a few voices for these reviews, which would make the experience sound a lot better, so that people can get a more encompassing presentation.
[Review Request Club]
I'm a voice actor but I thought about reading out the reviews but I guess I left out that idea.
Thanks for the review
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