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I made this teaser because of the all the feed back asking me to give them a bit of a taste to what to look forward to, just to keep the viewers interested.
btw dont bag out the sound that its low quality, its mean't to be like that!
i love the teaser and i sure cant wait for you to finish it
i dont know if you remember but i was the one who sended you the link of the elfe lied manga in englsih i hope you like it :) else i really cant wait for you to finish :D
Your not moty kun are you?
And thanks alot, I really enjoyed the manga.
I have to say, elfen lied is one of the best anime ever! i'm not quite sure what happend at the end of the video. i wish you would give a little recap on that.
Overall I'd like to say that the artwork was well done, and that the animation was decent as well. Something you should work on would be the blood (the color and animation of it). Also, you really didn't capture the story very well, you just showed some people dying when there's a lot more to the Anime series than that. Try to put in a little more story, I wouldn't even mind if you still kept no voice acting in it. As long as you can capture the story by showing the characters' emotions, some key points to the series, and probably show off the vectors a little more!
Hope this helped!
Well...? I'm waiting for the full thing!
Before I go into review details, I first want to say that Elfen Lied was one of the best manga I've ever read. The concept of the vector arms was original and most of the characters were great to have in the series.
The flashback part was well put in the middle of the story and I must say, you've animated that quite impressive:
No bullshit, you just animated the (emotionally) most brutal part and did a fine job at that. I disagree that it looks old, this looks just fine. The colors 'made sense' and the emotions were (fairly) well drawn. I'd like to mention, however that the movement of the... loose bodyparts and the blood were done a little unnatural. I'm not sure how hard it is to make that more realistic, but that's a slight reminder from me.
Not THAT bad quality and it fitted well. I would have liked some more music (at the silent parts, apart from the bloodshed you can make the music softer).
I'm not gonna review concept, since this is from another story and it's a teaser, so here's the total score:
Overall that makes an 8,5/10 rounded up to a 9/10 and a 4/5. Keep it up and please send me a PM with the link to the full version, because I'll definately forget to check... Sorry :P
wow, im impressed with the review, thankyou so much for understanding C:
thanx alot for the tips, it was really helpful
I love this series! you seen the whole thing? Epic series, and I like the animation! ^_^
i seen the whole thing yeah, would die over this anime love it to bits, im in the midle of reading the manga and the story is alot more harsh and gruesome. :/
and thanx :)
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