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This is an early movie from TVGravy
hope you like
Sorry for the looping
UUMMM... WHAT? OH WELL... WHATEVER, NOT BAD.
Well... that was weird...
First things first. The idea is really good, BUT, the voices feel kinda weird, mostly the "screams", if they are screams at all, when he starts his weird hallucination and when he explodes.
I think you could really improve the voice, giving your a clip a better "presentation" and better scores (don't worry about me, I gave you 5 xp).
The art was not bad, but at the same time not so good, something was missing, maybe a little details on James' face would improve it. And you should definitely improve the hallucination scene, not just making James' face in green, blue and red moving from side to side, and adding a colored background.
If you come up with a new "trip" for James, the video would be more interesting.
And finally, the music, no complaints on it, it is very good, is very interesting. I was wondering if you could tell me the name of the song and the performer, it really caught my attention.
So, in the end, good video, could improve quite a bit, and you shouldn't stop working on stuff like this, like I said, the idea is very good and it can be exploited to come with new ideas. So, good job lad, keep it up, always up.
thanks man. we are working hard to fix quality issues and put more detail into the art!
good start, nice idea
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This was quite funny for an original. If you can, try to upload a version where the audio is synchronised with the mouth movements. If the audio file is in a .mp3 format, consider converting it to .wav.
thanks for the advice
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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