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This is an animation I made for uni last year which I never got round to submitting to Newgrounds. It was made for some Sesame Street contest on Aniboom or something so expect it to be ungodly cutesy.
I feel compelled...
I love M alliterations as you could probably tell from my username. At first I didn't really get the point but the credits quickly fixed that. Watched it twice and I now have a genuine appreciation for it! Clever idea, good animation, and a simple diversionary tale that brings a smile to your face.
I must say, this was a very well animated piece! I have to admit though, it has that morning TV feeling, as if this was meant for small children. Sorry. But I still laughed in that nostalgic way! But I digress. The background music was well-chosen, in my opinion, because it had that light care-free bounce to it. Only thing I'd ask for improvement on would be expression in the narration and maybe actual sound effects rather than more narration.
PS: It's brought to you by the letter M because everything started with that letter. :P
Since it was for a Sesame-Street themed competition, it was geared for small children.
And yes, I agree that the narration sucks balls.
this actually wasnt bad
but the energy still seems focused 2 much in areas, and made some expressions a tad bland but there were some nice bits of animation in there - clean at least. (y)
Yeah i remember that comp... never got around to entering in it. Anyway it was great! made me lol. How the hell are u supposed to mop in the jungle? Anyway 5/5 10/10 great voice acting. I look forward to more!
It seems like you were really working on a children's book when you had this in mind. As usual, the animation is fantastic and has a very bubbly feeling to it. I couldn't help but wonder what thing that started with an "M" was going to show up next. As I could guess from your looks, you would know monkeys are an endless source of humor. You might want to even turn this into a real book if you still want to. It's so cute and not ungodly at all.
As usual, it's great to see how everyone moves and flows together so well. It just shows that you can appeal to any audience you need to. That magician hat will simply never die out. You had a nice, soft voice in this and you should show this to your kids if you have or get any. Even "Sesame Street" stuff doesn't look dated to us NGers.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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