FAUX: Chapter 4
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Author marsoupskin
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- Daily Feature July 29, 2011
- Weekly 3rd Place August 2, 2011
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Author Comments
production blog: http://fauxplog.blogspot.
com/
It's been wait but Chapter 4 is finally done. Hope you enjoy.
My attention now turns to the next chapter, as you might know it will be the first to be animated and voiced. I'm pretty excited about this.
I'd also like to point your attention to the IndieGoGo funding drive for Chapter 5, if you can contribute any amount of your hard earned denero to the cause I'd be very appreciative. Or even just spread the word to people you know.
the link is: http://www.indiegogo.com/
FAUX5/
Anyway thanks to everyone as always for your continued interest in my work.
cheers.
-Marcel
Reviews
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 3, 2011
epic!
this is so good the only bit that anoy me is the clifhangers
Rated 4 / 5 stars July 28, 2011
Where's the animation?
Yeah it's good, but it seems like a comic rather than an animation. Bunch of speech bubbles and still scenes.
Rated 4 / 5 stars August 1, 2011
Climatic
Not sure how intelligent that was. When the girl you're protecting takes a blade to the chest, the biggest priority is preventing blood loss - something that's incredibly difficult to do with that type of injury. She took the blade on the left side, possibly causing organ damage, but vitally missing the heart. Despite this, there are still plenty of arteries to worry about and given the diameter of the wound, the issue of rapid blood loss would kill her far faster than any organ damage or otherwise.
Brilliant build-up. While the dialogue borders on being dry and predictable at times, the overall story and plot is noteworthy, as is the quality of art - despite limited animation, which I guess was a trade-off. Will look forward to the rest of the series - especially if the voice-acting on the next episode is pulled-off well.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 30, 2011
Fridge logic'd
Music, art, all good as the others :D
On the other hand, I didn't get how Armand leaves Jan (even for a second) while she's bleeding to death. Right, the sword through the chest must've missed a particularly vital spot, I can handle that much, but going from walking to dead so neatly just didn't work.
One last thing - Since Jan managed to off Lacorse or whoever (seemingly a master fighter) she must've done it pretty quickly to get him with his guard down (Okay, so she's on the end of his sword, not the most likely spot for retaliation) but it looked a bit slow and painful. This bloke practically dodges bullets.
But yeah, otherwise great stuff :)
Rated 3 / 5 stars July 31, 2011
not bad but
this part is worser than firs ones.
1- when jan was stabed with katana she couldnt live even for five min but we saw that killer took her and she was steel alive when he arrived.
2-when jans friend found her he first said " are u ok?" she said " had been better"
and then he left her to take some of killers papers! Dont u think thats strange? wut a bastard he must be to do that!