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Notebook Assault

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rated 3.32 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Action - Shooter - Run 'n Gun
Tags:
sketch
stick
traps
notebook

Credits & Info

Uploaded
Jul 26, 2011 | 1:37 PM EDT

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Author Comments

The world is a notebook where everybody should draw.
You must recover the pencil!

Reviews


SunOhSunOh

Rated 5 / 5 stars

AWESOME!

You did a good job. It's really decent.



MisterTigMisterTig

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good game

The controls were simple, and the music choice didn't bother me. Gameplay was good, and I have no problem with it at all. You missed out on a 10/10 because of the time limit thing. I think for games like this, a time limit is not really needed, and takes a bit of the fun out of the games, but I'm sure you had your reasons for putting a time limit in.

Overall, great game. :)



EletiousEletious

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It's... okay...

While I like the general idea of the game, I feel as though the control scheme could have been a bit more thought out for the type of open-world environment the notebook created. Either that, or maybe the environment should have been changed altogether. Perhaps the game could have taken place in an infant's drawing or something, or maybe a better aiming mechanic could have been implemented to give this game the little push it would have needed to be a great game.

Also, as much as I appreciate your choice in music, I feel like it was generic and poorly thought out. It doesn't really set the mood for the game at all, seeing as how it's techno and the villan looks medieval. I don't think the music is bad, I just think that you could have put a bit more thought into it.

The last problem I have with this game is the generic animation. It looks a bit too generic, and it makes the player feel removed. The menu is the polar opposite: it's too smooth, so you have a very conflicting game feel.

I know I sound like a dick, especially because I haven't uploaded anything of my own, but try to keep those points in mind when you create games in the future. Little things like that are really noticeable on the client end.



ArmyofDorknessArmyofDorkness

Rated 3 / 5 stars

its a game

but not a great game.



littlegonkyboylittlegonkyboy

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

good game

graphics its minimal, but enjoyable, the controls are good, the game itself its good!
also the music its not bad!


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