I didn't understand any shit!!!
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A One week project (how much could this get better)... Haha, put this on the Mario Portal Immediately! The plot to this is Mario travels around the first world and goes into a pipe without reading the sign. Of course then the rest of this leads to failure. Also the part when he gets hit by a rock and a video appears this is actually him day dreaming when he's knocked out!
-Enjoy! ^_^
loopchocolateman1234 responds:
its simple..... HE GETS PWNED!!!! (mario gets pwned 2 coming soon)
It was a good idea, but needs work.
First of all, this wasn't funny. You need comedy or action for a good movie, and this had neither. The animation was weird, but that's fine. The video that you had would have been better if it was a sprite animation, you could have put some comedy there. The story line didn't really exist, it was just a list of what seemed to be barely linked events. The overall idea was pretty good, but it needs a bit more work and thought put into it. He never got pwned...
loopchocolateman1234 responds:
The title was dramatic, j- just you know what read this and under stand why I'm not "Professional".
http://loopchocolateman1234.newground s.com/news/post/612292
I'm getting sick of this crap, hoping to get a better review every time but nnnnooooooo. Instead...... HUGE LET DOWN.... :(
It's really sad how when I grow up I want to be an animator but then I get really crappy reviews dumped on my head!
Yours Sincerely,
Charlie Y.
Weak.
I found it a rather weak flash - Here are some possible changes you might want to add.
1. The intro screens their white backgrounds, they just curse with whats on them.
2. Make a fbf walking animation for mario.
3. When he gets knocked out, make his fall less -static-
4. when he begins dreaming add a visual effect which indicates he's entering a dream.
loopchocolateman1234 responds:
2.Make a fbf walking animation for mario.
3. When he gets knocked out, make his fall less -static-
I'm sorry what does that mean???
i liked it made noscens but i dont care
it was funny
loopchocolateman1234 responds:
thank you, finally someone with some literature written in their mind.... :O
What?
I have absolutely no idea what this is about, and I've seen a game like this before. Better luck next time. :)
loopchocolateman1234 responds:
sorry I know it got off on a little track