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Mario Gets PWNED!

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rated 1.81 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
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mario
pipe
gets
pwned

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Uploaded
Jul 25, 2011 | 6:18 PM EDT

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Author Comments

A One week project (how much could this get better)... Haha, put this on the Mario Portal Immediately! The plot to this is Mario travels around the first world and goes into a pipe without reading the sign. Of course then the rest of this leads to failure. Also the part when he gets hit by a rock and a video appears this is actually him day dreaming when he's knocked out!

-Enjoy! ^_^

Reviews


SchafdawgSchafdawg

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

It was a good idea, but needs work.

First of all, this wasn't funny. You need comedy or action for a good movie, and this had neither. The animation was weird, but that's fine. The video that you had would have been better if it was a sprite animation, you could have put some comedy there. The story line didn't really exist, it was just a list of what seemed to be barely linked events. The overall idea was pretty good, but it needs a bit more work and thought put into it. He never got pwned...


loopchocolateman1234 responds:

The title was dramatic, j- just you know what read this and under stand why I'm not "Professional".
http://loopchocolateman1234.newground s.com/news/post/612292
I'm getting sick of this crap, hoping to get a better review every time but nnnnooooooo. Instead...... HUGE LET DOWN.... :(

It's really sad how when I grow up I want to be an animator but then I get really crappy reviews dumped on my head!

Yours Sincerely,
Charlie Y.


BrainworkInProgressBrainworkInProgress

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Weak.

I found it a rather weak flash - Here are some possible changes you might want to add.

1. The intro screens their white backgrounds, they just curse with whats on them.
2. Make a fbf walking animation for mario.
3. When he gets knocked out, make his fall less -static-
4. when he begins dreaming add a visual effect which indicates he's entering a dream.


loopchocolateman1234 responds:

2.Make a fbf walking animation for mario.
3. When he gets knocked out, make his fall less -static-

I'm sorry what does that mean???


Drifter7741Drifter7741

Rated 5 / 5 stars

i liked it made noscens but i dont care

it was funny


loopchocolateman1234 responds:

thank you, finally someone with some literature written in their mind.... :O


metoolawsonmetoolawson

Rated 1 / 5 stars

What?

I have absolutely no idea what this is about, and I've seen a game like this before. Better luck next time. :)


loopchocolateman1234 responds:

sorry I know it got off on a little track


KelpTheGreatKelpTheGreat

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Made no sense

I'm sorry to say it, but this is terrible. I read the other reviews and wondered why they were so low, because your little description sounded mildly interesting. I was hoping to offer a more positive viewpoint, but I cannot. There's nothing in here worth watching at all. What I CAN do is offer some advice.

1. Mario is not, strictly speaking, "pwned" in this little animation. To be pwned is to be owned (dominated) by another player. Mario isn't even owned - he just fails.

2. But... DOES he fail? What even happened? Mario doesn't take fall damage. All he did was go down a pipe and fall into a black room, and then is unhappy about it. What happens next is incomprehensible. I would not have had a clue what was going on, except that you explained it in your author comments. ProTip: any time you have to explain something in your video, you should have a big warning sign going off in your head.

3. Yeah, that little video/dream segment was just stupid. The sound was sped up and sounded bad, and him dreaming about failing while unconscious is kinda lame to begin with.

4. He comes back out of the pipe backwards - this is sloppy. And then he gets hit with a random bottle? Why?

5. I did like the silly way you drew Mario, but he didn't have any character, and the animation itself was, well, bad. Study some guides and try to improve.

So in conclusion, I really didn't see anything worth watching again, and I certainly wouldn't recommend it to anyone else, either. Blam.


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loopchocolateman1234 responds:

You know what, go say that to Egoraptor.....