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It isn't that bad...
The animation and artwork was pretty bad. Try adding color, it helps a lot. The words were completely unnecessary and the flash could do without them. If you had better animation and stuff, you would get the point of the flash across easier, because it basically flew past me. Also, having random stuff for your author comments... just makes you seem like a looser, no offence. What I believed was the point of the animation was pretty good, he was some guy who becomes a monster... somehow... when he sees the blood red moon, and goes insane. I probably didn't get it correctly, but that's all I could tell from this. Keep trying buddy, just keep trying.
I like the japanese-like animation and design... but its kinda confusing whith all that transitions...
Hope you can make it better :D
I see what your getting at he but
how this is drawn makes it VERY difficult to make out, try to put more effort into that next time. Detail in the drawing can make a big difference in how well people
view your work.
It is kinda nice
though this flash is really simple, it is also good. I mean it is noting complicated but the "story" is nice and the twist is also well done
A short film about a park bench
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